Comments and Feedback

Ok, so now I have completed my video which shall appear on this blog shortly, it is now time to begin to evaluate it:

Having completed my video, I decided to post it up on my Facebook account for my friends and family to see and comment on. After two days, it received over 34 likes and 11 comments.
In all the comments however, there were no posts about how to improve it. Many of the comments were simply praise, with no areas for improvement. This leads me to believe that to the 'untrained' eye that the video is as good as it can be. They all understood what the video was about, the flashback to some point in her past was clear and that she has been taken over by the number Pi by the Evil Professor Hawk.
For the people who knew the people featured, they all thought the casting of both Rory and Fionna was perfect for the roles they were playing.
I received no negative feedback about any of these areas of the video from the public viewing and this leads me to believe that the video is fit for purpose, delivers its message effectively and is well presented to the audience.

Discussing with my fellow Media Students, a few of them noticed a few irregularities concerning the two different train scenes.

 In the first scene, Lucy is shown to be sitting looking out of the window as the image super imposes on her eye, sitting in a seat with a wall behind it.

 

However, in the second scene, she seems to have change seats and is now wearing headphones when she wasn't before.

However, I had anticipated these queries. I explained how this would be part of how the film would move on from this point. I explained, how this was to show how she had been somewhere without the viewers knowledge, how she had changed trains and had put in her headphones. For what reason they then asked. I explained how this would have been the scene where we would then learn what affect the Professor was having upon Lucy. She had just been travelling to a targets home. She had left the train at the point where the flashback had begun, the idea for this was to express how the Professor was still controlling her even then. She had broken into the home and murdered the target (I could not be more exact in how, where or when as I only designed it to be an outline of what would have happened from this point). She had then boarded the train just as the flashback ended, put the headphones in as a method of hypnosis applied to her by the professor. So when the final shot comes on, this then explained the irregularity.